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Thirty over arrow have pierced his body. Blood dripping. He stands still. His heroic aura is so strong that the soldiers around him can't help admiring. That man is Zhen YuShen. 'Spit on the Emperor's face, Break through the gate of Hell'. This is the famous saying in the realm refering to Zhen YuShen's heroic.

Five years ago, the realm was shocked upon hearing the news that a brave young man has sneaked into the Palace and made his way into the Emperor's court. The corrupt Emperor was despised by many but no one can do anything about him. This young man, however, managed to stroll into the Emperor's court as the regular morning meeting with the ministers was held. He spat on the Emperor's face. "Today there is only my saliva on your face. If you don't change your way, the next time I am here, you will feel my punch on your face. And I will make sure you meet your ancestor with that punch." That is the warning he gave to the Emperor.

No one knew how he came in and no one knew how he suddenly vanished after saying that. Not even the Emperor's elite bodyguards have a single clue. Many corrupt officials who was there came to believe that he was sent by Heaven. They changed their way ever since. Of course he was just a normal human. But Zhen YuShen is a normal human with extraordinary lightness skill. His 'Wind Step' is unmatched under the sky.

"YuShen.. I admire your courage. But this is as far as you can go. Did I not advise you to forget her? You can have any woman you want but she belongs to the Chief of Devil Peak".

The man who was just talking is Liang QiMo. He is the chief commander of the Devil Peak archery squad that are now surrounding Zhen YuShen. He is also Zhen YuShen's best friend who has been his comrade ever since Zhen YuShen walked the realm five years ago. When YuShen went to the palace, QiMo was also with him. QiMo was the one who made sure that none of the Emperor's guards can make any move to stop YuShen. With regards to lightness gongfu, Liang QiMo is probably second only to Zhen YuShen.

"In Zhen YuShen's life, he only has few friends. Among them, Liang QiMo is the one who understands him the most, the only one he can trust. Now that YuShen has to die in QiMo's hand, YuShen can really die with no regret." Upon saying this, YuShen laughs bitterly.

Liang QiMo is the head of the Devil Peak's 7th post, which is also the last defense of Devil Peak. It might look strange that the last defense of the world number one cult is filled with archers. But these archers are no ordinary archers. Each one of them are brilliant figther with first rate lightness skill. Their formation is inpenetrable and Liang QiMo, the leader, is the master tactician who is able to command the squad to move about, attack and defend, so formidable that not even the best fighter in the realm can survive their arrows.

Before this, Zhen YuShen has crushed all the 6 other posts with ease. In truth, not even Liang QiMo's archers could have injured him should they know nothing about Zhen YuShen's lightness skill. But Liang QiMo is YuShen's best friend and he knows almost everything about Wind Step's changes and secrets.

"YuShen.. listen to me. You are a great hero. Your future is bright. Why do you have to waste your life today? If you agree to let her go, I will let you leave this place. I will take all the responsibility."

"QiMo.. I appreciate your good intention. But you know YuShen will not do such thing. If you really consider me your best friend, please just let me pass."

Sighing, QiMo could only stare at his best friend's wounded body. This is the man who saved his life six years ago. But this is the man he has to stop today. He can't betray his Sect Leader. He seems to be in a deep thought. Everyone else could only wait.

After half an hour, QiMo suddenly smiles and says "QiMo can never be YuShen's best friend if he does not understand the word 'Loyalty'."

"Hahahahaha" Zhen YuShen laughs heartily. He doesn't seem to feel any of the arrow on his body. "Indeed.. and YuShen can never be QiMo's friend if he does not understand the word 'Courage'".

Both of them look at each other. Nothing else is said. In truth, nothing need to be said.

Suddenly YuShen roars loudly, all the arrows that are planted on his body are shot out and with that, both YuShen and QiMo move. Their speed is indiscribeable. Speed of the gods. The moment they start the move is the moment they reach their destination.

'Aaahhhhh... Nooo..!!!' all the archers suddenly cry out in disbelief.

The next moment they could see YuShen and QiMo, the two are already standing face to face, they can't be any closer. QiMo's sword is deeply planted on YuShen's chest and YuShen's sword has pierced through QiMo's chest.

"Guan Yu's Last Laughter!" both of them shout in joy at the same time.

'Guan Yu's Last Laughter' is the stance that both of them invent. Emphasising on the speed and accuracy of the user, this stance is practically unstopable when used by lightness experts such as YuShen or QiMo. This is a suicidal stance that leave the user with zero defense. It takes a lot of courage and only when you are fighting for all your might could you execute the stance with perfection.

Now that both of them use the same stance by staking their life, the result is obviously fatal.

"Such a beauty.. QiMo.. to witness you executing that stance with such perfection is really worth dying for"

"Hahaha.. Unfortunately, there is no one else here who could appreciate the brilliance of this stance. No one will be able to tell the world of the greatness of our ultimate stance, YuShen."

No one there was able to grasp their speed and no one understood what has happened. This saddens QiMo as their 'Guan Yu's last laughter' is indeed a pure genius worthy of legendary status. Yu Shen seems to be less worried though.

"I just hope they will be able to tell the world how QiMo and YuShen has died courageously today. How both of us have died as best friends. The so-called righteous sects should know now that even in Devil Peak there is a great hero such as Liang QiMo."

"And I hope Devil Peak will acknowledge your courage and let Ling Er go.. But that is not possible.. YuShen, I.."

"I don't want you to apologize!"

"No.. You see.. this sword on my chest and the sword on your chest is good enough to repay my debt of gratitude to my sect. Now I am no longer part of Devil Peak. I am Zhen YuShen's comrade. So.."

"Hahaha.. so you are suggesting that both of us, with this half dead body, go up and teach those devils up there some lessons?"

"You think we can't make it?"

"What?! One Zhen YuShen, even if he is fully fit, may not win should he climb up and challenge the Three Eternal Devils. But Zhen YuShen and Liang QiMo fighting side by side? Even if the Emperor of the Netherworld is up there waiting, we will just spank him for good!"

"Good!! Shall we?"

Both of them smile and with that, both of them move. Speed of gods. The moment they start the move is the moment they reach their destination.

Comments

gileee ini bagus banget...udah setara dgn gu long!! tinggal nafasnya kuat aja utk nerusin sampe selesai!
phoenix chix said…
huehuehue wah gu long is a totally different level bro, he has created his own style.. thx for the compliment bro.. jgn lupa kritiknya juga ^^

yeah.. itu dia mslhnya. need lots of time to write a story till the end.

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